WALT use descriptive words and language to make our writing more interesting.
We did this piece of writing to practise using descriptive words and language.
The tall giraffe is eating the green trees slowly.
The tall green trees are moving slowly in the air.
The black and white stripy zebra is looking cautiously at the pond.
Tow things that i think i did good was writing the words and doing capitals and full stops.
I really liked the way you used your words to describe the trees.
ReplyDeleteSup Hoani, I liked how you used adjective to describe the zebra. I learnt that you are good at writing. next time maybye make it longer.
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