WALT use a conjunction to create a complex sentence.
We created this to show the complex sentences we worked on with our buddy and to show off our favourite one.
This is my favourite sentence because like the descriptive language that i added.
Wednesday, 31 July 2019
Friday, 5 July 2019
Descriptive Writing
WALT use descriptive words and language to make our writing more interesting.
We did this piece of writing to practise using descriptive words and language.
The tall giraffe is eating the green trees slowly.
The tall green trees are moving slowly in the air.
The black and white stripy zebra is looking cautiously at the pond.
Tow things that i think i did good was writing the words and doing capitals and full stops.
We did this piece of writing to practise using descriptive words and language.
The tall giraffe is eating the green trees slowly.
The tall green trees are moving slowly in the air.
The black and white stripy zebra is looking cautiously at the pond.
Tow things that i think i did good was writing the words and doing capitals and full stops.
Friday, 21 June 2019
Biography of Gerard David Steuen Venner
WALT write a biography
we wrote biography because are learning about our families.
We wrote biographies to tell other people about someone special in our family.
Gerard David Steuen Venner
Gerard is my dad ŧhe best dad i could have .
Gerard David Steven Venner was born in 4th of March and he was born in National Women's Hospital .
He is forty one year old.
Gerards favourite childhood memory is of geting a bmx bike for christmas and then riding arournd the neighborhood .
Gerard went to school at Rosebank Primary Avondale .
Gerard worked at a wood turning factory.
Gerards favourite colour is blue .
When my dad was at the beach he got knocked over by a wave he was embarrassed he was trying to impress some girls .
we wrote biography because are learning about our families.
We wrote biographies to tell other people about someone special in our family.
Gerard David Steuen Venner
Gerard is my dad ŧhe best dad i could have .
Gerard David Steven Venner was born in 4th of March and he was born in National Women's Hospital .
He is forty one year old.
Gerards favourite childhood memory is of geting a bmx bike for christmas and then riding arournd the neighborhood .
Gerard went to school at Rosebank Primary Avondale .
Gerard worked at a wood turning factory.
Gerards favourite colour is blue .
When my dad was at the beach he got knocked over by a wave he was embarrassed he was trying to impress some girls .
Thursday, 13 June 2019
My Family Story Animation
W.A.L.T
We have been learning about our families.
We have been learning the stories of our families.
We have been learning to tell stories though animations in Slides.
We have been learning to record using Screencastify.
We created this because we wanted to be able to share and save the special stories from our families.
Two things I think I did well are telling the story and using Screencastify.
Next time I would like to try better at putting different people in and better back rounds
Do you like what you see?
We have been learning about our families.
We have been learning the stories of our families.
We have been learning to tell stories though animations in Slides.
We have been learning to record using Screencastify.
We created this because we wanted to be able to share and save the special stories from our families.
Two things I think I did well are telling the story and using Screencastify.
Next time I would like to try better at putting different people in and better back rounds
Do you like what you see?
Monday, 13 May 2019
My Family
WALT organise our ideas in our writing into basic paragraphs so that we only talking about one thing or person at a time.
My Family
There is 6 people in my family. My dad's name is Gerrard he is 41. He works online moving people to new houses.
My Mum is 35. She has three jobs. Her jobs are cleaning the clinic. And caregiving and she is a teacher at Taipa.
My little brother Tamati is three. He makes me laugh. He plays with the puppies .
My big brother Matai is 15 . He likes playing on the computer. Also he loves playing on the xbox.
I have another big brother, his name is Taniora. He likes playing on his phone and with his friend Marley who has moved near to us.
I also have 2 half brothers, Mya who is 25 and Nixon he turned 18 on the 6th, 4 day ago and a half sister who is 22.
I love my family.
Reflection:
Two things I did well were writing my keywords and putting in my capital letters and full stops. Next time I want to do write my keywords down faster.
My Family
There is 6 people in my family. My dad's name is Gerrard he is 41. He works online moving people to new houses.
My Mum is 35. She has three jobs. Her jobs are cleaning the clinic. And caregiving and she is a teacher at Taipa.
My little brother Tamati is three. He makes me laugh. He plays with the puppies .
My big brother Matai is 15 . He likes playing on the computer. Also he loves playing on the xbox.
I have another big brother, his name is Taniora. He likes playing on his phone and with his friend Marley who has moved near to us.
I also have 2 half brothers, Mya who is 25 and Nixon he turned 18 on the 6th, 4 day ago and a half sister who is 22.
I love my family.
Reflection:
Two things I did well were writing my keywords and putting in my capital letters and full stops. Next time I want to do write my keywords down faster.
Friday, 3 May 2019
Digital pepha
W.A.L.T say our pepeha
Two things I think I did really well were putting the photos of my family on and I really like the backgrounds that I chose.
Next time I should put on a moving background.
W.A.L.T Animate in Google Slides.
WALT Say our pepeha.
WALT Say our pepeha.
WALT Animate in Google Slides.
Two things I think I did really well were putting the photos of my family on and I really like the backgrounds that I chose.
Next time I should put on a moving background.
Friday, 29 March 2019
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